Nicely done. Clear, picture perfect. I felt as if I was in the room with the folks and trembled at what was taking place before my very eyes in this moment of time.
Glad the skinny fuck can do something. Writing. Scribing. Pushing the lightweight pen looking for heavyweight words with dense meaning. Appropriate I say, appropriate. In any other day ‘n age they would have thrown ’em overboard, they would. Shark bait. Chum.
So, what’s up with the nanobots and Akira and Lassiter n’ such. I pretty much quit my SepSceneWriMo over on anonymole.com I got, I don’t know, jammed up with the effort, the failure to actually use it as a tool — just a publicity stunt. Bah.
There’s recent multi-episode story over there “Apocalypse with pictures”, that PH calls “meh Boy’s Life” but without heart.
If you have Netflix I recommend Wednesday.
Cool. You’d be 3. Keep it on the down low. I’m not looking for crowd approval or crowd motivation. Blogging USED to be fun for me and I’m looking for that feeling to return.
This was excellent. I felt like I was in the room. You really are a master at creating characters, especially the captain–very subtle but such an impact:-)
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Nicely done. Clear, picture perfect. I felt as if I was in the room with the folks and trembled at what was taking place before my very eyes in this moment of time.
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Thanks Mike. Lots of other writing over on https://anonymole.com/ but, you’d have to re’follow there.
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Glad the skinny fuck can do something. Writing. Scribing. Pushing the lightweight pen looking for heavyweight words with dense meaning. Appropriate I say, appropriate. In any other day ‘n age they would have thrown ’em overboard, they would. Shark bait. Chum.
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Channeling my Robert Louis Stevenson.
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So, what’s up with the nanobots and Akira and Lassiter n’ such. I pretty much quit my SepSceneWriMo over on anonymole.com I got, I don’t know, jammed up with the effort, the failure to actually use it as a tool — just a publicity stunt. Bah.
There’s recent multi-episode story over there “Apocalypse with pictures”, that PH calls “meh Boy’s Life” but without heart.
If you have Netflix I recommend Wednesday.
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Watching Wednesday now. Vicious dialogue.
On the other issue, “Bah.”
If I do continue, it’ll ‘prolly be on a private blog. Want to be invited?
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Invite? Of course.
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Cool. You’d be 3. Keep it on the down low. I’m not looking for crowd approval or crowd motivation. Blogging USED to be fun for me and I’m looking for that feeling to return.
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I concur. Ergo my return to this venue for additional inspiration.
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This was excellent. I felt like I was in the room. You really are a master at creating characters, especially the captain–very subtle but such an impact:-)
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Thanks again, Suzanne.
I’m gonna edit this, there’s a twist I wanted to inject, but didn’t know how to go about it until now.
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Can’t wait!
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